Your characterization is spot-on and Hermione's voice is DELICIOUS and the little tid-bits of pretty girls and capital "T" thoughts and maybe figuring it out but not is so damn perfect.
And LUNA, oh that was great, and picturing the wizarding world's ideas of sexuality and marriage like that is interesting and a little bit fascinating.
Arabella works at the Ministry; it was in The Prophet; you saw her picture, a new voice in her head tells her, but aloud she says "it's not like that. I'm not gay."
This was good, a wonderful bittersweet yet hopeful maybe, so many emotions all twirled together. It hurts but it doesn't? Or it's the good kind of hurt?
Really I just want to roll around in this fic and sing its praises. <3
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Date: 2013-05-02 06:15 pm (UTC)Your characterization is spot-on and Hermione's voice is DELICIOUS and the little tid-bits of pretty girls and capital "T" thoughts and maybe figuring it out but not is so damn perfect.
And LUNA, oh that was great, and picturing the wizarding world's ideas of sexuality and marriage like that is interesting and a little bit fascinating.
Arabella works at the Ministry; it was in The Prophet; you saw her picture, a new voice in her head tells her, but aloud she says "it's not like that. I'm not gay."
This was good, a wonderful bittersweet yet hopeful maybe, so many emotions all twirled together. It hurts but it doesn't? Or it's the good kind of hurt?
Really I just want to roll around in this fic and sing its praises. <3